I completely changed my plot; this was to make it more interesting and a better storyline which would be better to watch and draw in a larger audience.
I made small detail adjustments to what happened on the days, and what happened when she got back, but I made a major plot change, deciding to delete the part where she found the necklace (it would be unrealistic to be able to even hold a brick in the Parthenon) and deciding that Esme won't embody the powers Athena did and applying them to everyday life, instead in her sleep she travels back in time and becomes Athena and live as her, replicating events that in mythology are said to have happened (blinding Tiresias when he sees her bathing in the lake, making him a prophet, trying to stop the Trojan war and fighting with Poseidon to see who will be the patron deity of Athens) this will give more of a story line, more excitement and more adventure. While being Athena, a necklace is put on her, and on the archaeological dig she finds that exact necklace, tying the modern day story back to the ancient world of Athena.
I think these changes have helped my story and it will be more of a success over the initial one.
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